Thank you.

thanks with conan's line at 22:04, i think its worth noting that 99% of all the various conan translations ive seen over the years followed the same style guide of "Edogawa Conan, a detective." up to you if you think its worth keeping the extra words like you have of course, but my thought as someone who has followed that series on and off for long enough is that it'd be worth dropping the couple extra words for consistency with all the old conan style guides

Sure, sounds reasonable then!